Category: Writers Block
Fun poem
My version of the Julio Iglesias and Willie Nelson song
To all the guys who lied before,
To all those who had crammed my score
To all who made me cry
And those who made me try
And should have ended on the floor.
To all the balls I should have kicked,
And all of those pathetic dicks,
I wish that I had just,
But this is in the past,
And I won’t fall for these old tricks.
Pretty good, but it was too short and too soon to end. I think you should add more to this, but other than that, your topic was up front. I felt like you wanted to say more, but anyway, good job with the poem.